Write Better, Dammit!

This is a blog for my graduate students. The more you perfect the style, the more you perfect the content.

Sunday, September 18, 2016

What is a Sentence, Dammit?

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Here are some lines from graduate student essays: 1.  When he laughed at my question, at first I was surprised, in all fou r years of my...
Sunday, November 15, 2015

The Star-Spangled Banner and the Self-Flagellating Monk

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What do the two items in the title have in common? They both have hyphens.  That's probably all unless the self-flagellating monk was ...
Saturday, November 14, 2015

Reading Your Essays, Frustration Arose

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My student began his essay with this:   "Nearing the end of summer vacation, it was the time when exchange students bid farewell to the...
Thursday, October 29, 2015

Undangling Your Prepositions

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A student stops a professor on the university campus. Student:  Hey, professor, where’s the library at? Professor:  Never, never,...
Monday, October 26, 2015

Do I Indent My Paragraphs?

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There are two ways to indicate a new paragraph: indent the first line of the paragraph by one-half inch do not indent, but leave extra s...
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Sunday, October 25, 2015

Ode to the Colon

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The full colon is a much abused couple of dots.  It is often omitted or misplaced.  I just ran across this sentence in my student's essa...
Wednesday, October 14, 2015

The Semicolon is Everywhere

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Suddenly, the semicolon is a very popular tattoo.   It is a sign that "the sentence is not  over yet" for people struggling with m...
Sunday, October 11, 2015

Using Numbers in Your Writing

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The following rules come from  the  NASA Style Guide .    I find this style guide to have great tips.  I generally agree with everything th...
Saturday, October 10, 2015

Comma Coma #8: Conjunctivitis

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Conjunctions (and, but, as, or nor, yet) join things. Sometimes conjunctions join two complete sentences.  Each sentence has a subject a...

Capital Confusion #3: Don't Be a Spambot

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Students: Learn correct capitalization or you will be mistaken for a spammer. This email arrived recently: How many errors do you ...
Tuesday, October 6, 2015

Time to Canadianize Your Writing

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Welcome to Canada.  Welcome to my class. You have likely been in many other classes up to now.  The classes that involved writing in Engl...
Saturday, September 26, 2015

Comma Coma #7: When You Have an Introductory Word, Phrase, or Clause, Insert a Comma.

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A sentence has a primary subject and a verb: Stephen Harper ( subject ) is ( verb ) our former prime minister. There might be other par...
Friday, September 25, 2015

Parallel Structure ~ Blurred Lines

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Towards the end of the last century, one of my college students wrote, "I work with men, women, and truck drivers." I suggested...

Very Insecure, Pretty Significant, Quite Irrational

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It seems that the Harris Academy in Upper Norwood has banned some words.  Good for them.  I'd like to ban some words as well.  Here...
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Monday, September 14, 2015

PROOFREADING

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Last year, some students were rushed preparing their  Getting to  Yes  presentation.  It seems that one team member ended up doing all the...
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Sunday, July 26, 2015

Parts of Speech

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Dear Students Before you read any further, make sure you understand the vocabulary of this blog.  Please review the parts of speech .  H...
Monday, July 6, 2015

Comma Coma #6: Roughing It in the Bush

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In a  previous  blog, I wrote about the problem of using too many commas. Here's a sentence on the back cover of an edition of Rough...
Tuesday, June 23, 2015

What is Professional Writing? (aka Graduate-Level Writing)

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If you are in graduate school, then you should be functioning at a graduate level. An article from the Royal Roads University website  at...
Thursday, February 5, 2015

CAPITAL CONFUSION #2

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I just read this sentence in my graduate student's essay: " I was selected to work on a project for the open source software M...
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In the Sid and Mary blog, I will post my parents' letters to one another beginning January, 1946. I have two other blogs. One exists to teach my students how to write better. https://writebetterdammit.blogspot.com/ The other blog is called "Lil's Book of Questions." https://lilblume.blogspot.com/. I've been collecting questions and comparing answers for years. See my website for two downloadable lists of questions for you to play with http://www.lilblume.ca/.
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